Fleet
One Vehicle Tracking system is developed by WEX Fleet One which offers
a wide range of GPS tracking solutions to both the private and government
sectors, catering to vehicle fleets of varying sizes.
According
to Goetz (2011), its digital platform consists of a two-way touchscreen interface that displays fleet information. Likewise, value added features such as online account management and ‘fuel transactions reporting’, helps makes the system intuitive and allows companies to reduce ‘fuel fraud’ when
refuelling.
Additionally, trainings are
provided by for new users
through both online and offline means.
In my opinion, this
telematics product would be of great value as its integrated system would help the
company to improve its fleet management.
Sources: Fleet One Helps Narrow Down
Important Data. (2011, February). Lauren
Fletcher and Grace Suizo. Retrieved from http://www.automotive-fleet.com/article/story/2011/02/the-evolution-of-telematics.aspx
-evolution-of-telematics.aspx
Dear Telson,
ReplyDeleteThese are my points, after reading your product description.
1. No citation information.
2. Key points are present, in the first paragraph.
3. No mention abt the main idea of the source article.
4. Response focuses on a specific aspect of the source article in the second paragraph, but only mentioned very briefly.
5. Stand present, with an opinion and reason.
There were also some grammar errors in your product description.
Example: "Additional, trainings are provided by for new..."
There is no need for the word "by", in this sentence.
Thanks for reading my opinions.
Sincerely,
Karthig
Dear Karthig,
ReplyDeleteThank you for reviewing my product description summary. I have made the required changes in my following drafts.
Regards,
Telson